Peer Feedback
(different colour represents a different person)
Below are some other feedback sheets my peers filled in
The only improvements people said were:
Add lip syncing
Warmer colour correction
Try not to reuse shots
Make sure actors do not look at the camera
Make sure all my shots are in focus
The only improvements I am taking on board is the colour correction and try not to use the slightly out of focus shots.
The reason I am disregarding the other improvements is because I purposely didn't from the outset want to do that. Many people suggested adding lip syncing but I wanted the music and the visuals to tell the narrative instead, and because I couldn't get the artist in my video I didn't want someone young lip syncing an older voice because it would of looked unusual and out of place. The reason I have reused some shots is because the location montage at the beginning is to set the scene for the whole video and the different locations so when each specific scene appears it will already be familiar with the audience. The female actor looked at the camera once and the clip is at the most 1 second long so I am just going to leave it in the video.
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